I didn’t feel it went too well in that time. I ended up getting frustrated on stage. However as i move further from it I think it is interesting to not know what to do or have too much planning given the direction of my work. I tried singing and my work became interesting when I had ran out of songs that i could remember the lyrics to. I came out of the scratch feeling like i am perhaps relying too much on the props/make it harder element and they were almost becoming a crutch.
I feel like i should incorporate some voice over stuff to try out at some point. Similar to what i tried out during the ACP module.
It also made me think about how early or late the dental guard should come into play. Coming in too early can affect its effectiveness as I like to have a base performance for it to distort.
I feel like my work is leaning more and more into non literative phenomena rather than genre comedy.
A youtube video played at the end and i found that interesting, it broke me out of the performance and created a moment of 1st person and 3rd person dynamic for the piece. However this was not planned and I think would be hard to replicate as it was so in that specific moment.
I also played with the goggles in this scratch and I felt because they had a reflective surface they broke my connection with the audience which definitely impeded my comedy. The goggles I would play with at a later date over my glasses to keep the connection and the theme of the show.
I need to look at the wheel as I felt it wasn’t spinning well which i wasn’t happy about.
The scratch was described as a disaster curve which i think is a good way to look at the show. A constructed failure that failed more and as a result constructed more. It feels like it creates its own world during the show. Another piece of feedback i got was that the struggle reinforced the point. and that the audience feel the need to help, I think this is due to the connection i create when i am on stage.
The amount of control i have on stage was brought into question. Which i have in later performances tried to solve by changing the rules to the ‘make it harder’ to apply it to the previous selection on the wheel as this narrows my options and also plays with the base performance that they have seen only moments before.
I was recommended that i spend more time with things, which i think is good, however the comic brain in me wants to move on quicker. I think this is something definitely worth exploring. I have since added another unspoken rule to the show where I do something until I am bored of it.
Another piece of feedback i received was that there was a want for a little more clarity in terms of the audiences role in the show.
I asked if they felt they were seeing jokes and comic performance and the resounding response was there is lots of it in this show. As the fear can be that you push the boundaries so much it moves away from comedic performance and is that possible? and if it is what does it become?
There was talk of lots of little mini build ups of tension. This reminds me of the Steve Martin book born standing up. He mentioned that if he kept on building up the tension the audience could decide when it was released and I believe this plays with the power dynamics that I am also playing with. This also plays into the idea of tension that Jimmy Carr and Lucy Greaves talk about in The naked jape.
I was advised to look at pace.
I was told that the stand up bits feel unfamiliar in the set up and it doesn’t land as well as my intent is questioned.
For the staging I had the mic on the stand which is recognisable and a good starting point for the performance. The placement of the box is a continual change for me. I want to put it behind me sometimes but in front of me others at the side of me. I don’t know what to do with it yet as I feel I have a 100 different stage set ups based on the various venues I perform in.
I have been told the box is intriguing and to put it at the front. the box is starting to get a bit tatty and I want to adjust the way it looks soon.
I was told in terms of risk that there is more to be done in terms of risk, as im not risking as much as i could. Some of the props do not have as much risk as at first glance.
This kind of feedback is very useful and helps inform me much more than the physical performance in front of a live crowd in terms of minutia details. I think that studio work with feedback could be very useful moving forward I just have to work out how to utilise the performance in that studio capacity properly.